But the problem is that when I was writing, the world had already started to accelerate [after all, the system is too scary, even if the Cocoon of the End is not a human and even has no emotions, it will be scared to death in my eyes], so many things can't be as gentle as in the original.
So many things happened in the Chiyou chapter of the original novel. On the one hand, it was because Ji Zi wanted to find the holy scar to prolong her life. On the other hand, after entering, everyone did not have much information, which led to a big problem.
The protagonists thought that the two objects were Chi You's heart, so they blew up the two objects in order to get rid of Chi You. However, after the explosion, they realized that they were the seals of Dan Zhu and Cang Xuan, and Chi You's core part was somewhere else.
This was a mistake caused by insufficient intelligence. If he had opened the two seals after seeing them in the presence of the protagonist, then he must have had a mental problem. I certainly would not have written it this way.
So in this case, as long as the story develops according to the original novel, Chi You will have no chance of waking up in the end.
In this plot, the protagonists went to Jiuyou very peacefully, dismantled the Titan mecha very peacefully, and then returned very peacefully...
——I’m writing a bullshit story. No one wants to read this kind of plot.
At times like this, someone has to take action.
It is definitely impossible to expect Xing, a fool who was fooled by Bronya's few words, to cause trouble, so we can only hope that the World Snake will take action.
It can be said that at this point, things have begun to get out of my control.
The World Snake has a tendency to acquire Chi You, so there is no problem for Raven to break the seal. The problem is how Raven can escape.
The quantum teleportation system first appeared in the original novel in the Anti-Entropy Invasion chapter, which was in an uncertain time in 2014-2015. The timeline of the Anti-Entropy Invasion chapter was after the Jiuyou/Chiyou chapter, so at least it was uncertain at that time.
In order to make this book stronger, I had to ask Cocolia to do it.
Then back to the plot, it is unreasonable for the quantum teleportation system that was developed in advance and without the technical support of conservatives to have no defects. It is hard to say whether Raven can escape to this point.
Considering that Chi You was originally set up to absorb everything around him, even if the system could be activated, it was hard to say whether he had the energy to escape.
At this point, many things are really over.
Raven can't run away, and after she can't run away, the protagonist will inevitably kill Chi You. With all these prerequisites confirmed, it is almost inevitable that she will be found and captured by the protagonist group.
Of course it’s not a problem to avoid it forcibly, but everyone would definitely be unhappy if the troublemaker dog escaped. After thinking about it, I still feel that I can’t write it this way.
As a result, after the raven was caught, problems arose.
Having written this far I must admit that although I have been speeding up the plot, my original idea certainly did not intend to speed it up to this extent.
I vaguely remember that I didn't intend to put so much pressure on Lin Yu at the beginning, and even thought at the end of the last book, "I hope to write a light-hearted and happy story this time, although I dare not be sad, but I can be sad."
But it turns out that plans often cannot keep up with changes.
At a certain point in the plot, the author will lose some control over the plot if logic is to be used.
For example, when Raven was captured, her biggest thought was to survive, and after being captured she would definitely choose to save her life and sell out the World Snake [she was not considered a die-hard fan in the original book, and she even left the World Snake].
As soon as Raven sold the World Snake, combined with the fact that she was the representative of Shencheng Medicine, the protagonists and Otto were able to dig out a lot of information.
It was inevitable that the gray snake would be caught.
After the Gray Snake was dealt with, it had to look for more people to exploit, but that’s a story for another time.
The plots that extend from this character can be said to be one of the fundamental reasons for the further acceleration of the plot.
In a sense, Su, who is mentioned in the chapter related to the protagonist's character, is a character with a certain positioning - because of these two characters, the protagonist becomes too strong and the plot becomes difficult to write, which is particularly awkward.
Obviously, this character's position in the plot is not very important, but because of a mistake, I was forced by Raven to write many difficult plots later. I guess I learned a lesson.
By the way, in my opinion, what Raven did in this book was that she deserved to die. The reason why I didn’t find a chance to kill her later was purely because Lin Yu and I tortured each other mentally, which led to me almost completely forgetting about this character.
It was several months later, until the Ruler of Law arc, that I remembered, oh, it seems like she had already gone to the headquarters, and then I remembered the existence of such a character.
At this point, his murderous intent towards her had faded, and in the end he did not kill her.
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Stan - In terms of positioning, he is the bodyguard role I assigned to Kiana in the early stage.
But later I found that there was no need for that. After all, Kiana was with Lin Yu most of the time, and it was a bit strange that she could still encounter danger with Lin Yu.
In the end, he became the one making fun of the cat, and was not pulled out until the final battle to protect Lin Yi.
I don't think there's much to say, let's move on to the next one.
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Gray Snake - A villain who should have had more plot.
When I first wrote Gray Snakes I already knew how... diverse the Gray Snake community was?
I was quite surprised when I found out that there was a traitor in the Gray Snake group after watching the plot.
Yes, I'm talking about Gray Snake 1904.
The only gray snake that appears in the book is Gray Snake 1904, except for the administrator Gray Snake which I specifically emphasized as an independent individual.
The original plan was to have Grey Snake 1904 defect, but because the plot was accelerated later, Grey Snake 1904 had no chance to defect.
After all, Kevin jumped first, and he jumped hairily.
As a super gray snake whose appearance is different from other gray snakes, Administrator Gray Snake should have more plots.
But as the plot speeds up, many problems will be magnified.
For example - the issue of the combat power of the World Snake.
In fact, in the early stage of the plot, the high-end combat power of the World Snake could only rely on Raven, the holder of the Key of God, to hold the scene because Kevin was soaked in water.
Then Raven was forced to fail in this book in a very embarrassing way. After the failure, in order to survive in accordance with the character's personality, he directly sold the World Serpent. As a result, many things that happened later became difficult to deal with.
Whether it is the quantum teleportation system on Cocolia's side or the Joyce clone, the time of their clear appearance is after the Anti-Entropy Invasion chapter.
This book was forced to be brought forward purely because Cocolia and Gray Snake were inexplicably forced into a desperate situation. If they were not strengthened, Lin Yu and Otto would have been able to easily defeat them later.
Of course, strengthening it is useless.
The administrator Gray Snake in the book struggled very hard and succeeded in unsealing Chiyou, but Chiyou was caught when he climbed onto the raven. He immediately rushed to Saint Freya to rescue people or kill them to silence them.
After the failure, start the next action immediately. After launching the action, get the information from Cocolia and then directly launch the mass production plan of the Herrscher.
After the core transfer plan of the Moon Shadow chapter failed, they immediately raided the Oceania branch and took Wendy away. After Wendy was taken away, she immediately went to Su for help.
After finding out that Cocolia was unreliable, they prepared to raid Haiyuan City. They used all the conditions they could. The Yellow Spring Staff was buried in the body and self-destructed. This plot that I didn't expect at first would actually appear later...
He really works hard.
I am almost moved by the hard work.
Unfortunately, the prerequisites were insufficient, resulting in the World Snake having too few cards to use. No matter how hard it tried, I couldn't do anything.
If there wasn't an Otto, I would have no idea how this book would release Kevin under the prerequisites of [Su looks at Haiyuan City] and [Old Yang Siegfried is fine].
It feels like the Jackal is just a pure tool, there's nothing much to say, let's just skip it and see who's next.
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Sister Arlene - a tool visible to the naked eye.
In fact, I hardly mentioned them in the previous book, and there is not much plot about them in this book. It can be seen that I have no interest in these two characters.
The reason why this book came out is very simple...
The World Snake is dead.
To save Kevin, you must have a higher combat power.
As a result, the three men squatting at the gate of Haiyuan City were more powerful than each other. Without enough fighting power, Lao Yang could solve the problem alone. Siegfried and Su had no problem watching the show.
Although the plot never stopped from the time when Sue came out of confinement to the time when Kevin came out of confinement, I was trying hard to think about how to get Kevin out during this period of time.
Finally, it was discovered that even if the World Snake tried its best, it was useless, so the only option was to increase the pressure on the World Snake.
So Rosalia and Lilia became fusion warriors two years earlier. There was nothing they could do about it.
And because these two unlucky guys essentially had no important role in the plot, they hardly appeared in the show after being rescued.
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Mike——the super extra king.
In other words, he can no longer be considered a supporting role, but a minor supporting role.
The prototype is not MacArthur, but the unlucky pilot in Resident Evil 4.
As I mentioned before in the character setting of the main character, when the author writes something, it often depends on the material available at the time.
After finishing the last book, I played the remake of Resident Evil 4. Although it was a simple difficulty level to complete the game, I still felt that this game was really good.
Later in the story, when Leon finally got friendly support, the pilot of the plane was called Mike.
I didn’t think much about it at first. When I saw Mike flying the plane and killing people, I thought it was finally a great game.
Then he was elbowed down by the villain leader's monster [in the original version, he was knocked down by an RPG that could turn corners].
Before he was about to pick up Leon, Mike said that he would treat Leon to a drink when he got back, but the wine was gone within a minute.
I was so angry at that time. I finally got a reinforcement, but my good brother was gone.
So this book also writes about a pilot named Mike who has a good relationship with the protagonist, and he actually goes to the bar to drink with the protagonist.
I don't have any other ideas. The reason why he can appear in various places is purely because I am really full of regret for this character in my heart, so I add more scenes for him.
However, although this character was added due to the reasons mentioned above, it also condenses some of my views on the members of the Savior Headquarters.
In the plot of this book, Mike is first and foremost a pilot who picks up the [Preparatory S-Class]. In my opinion, he should be the top pilot in Sentence.
Everyone has their own personality, but for someone like this to have gotten to this point, it must be due to more than just professional ability, it must also be based on some other abilities.
So within the plot, my approach is to try to write him as a character with a tragic life story, who is capable, understands human nature, and who is at least comfortable to get along with.
There's really nothing else to say, let's go to the next one.
Oh, there is no next one.
It is definitely impossible to finish 20,000 words, so the first part ends here. I’ll see if I can find time to finish the next part in the next few days.
It's about 15,000 words, a waste of time, so watch it with caution.
Maki - In terms of role positioning, it is similar to the original. Everyone knows that there is such a person, and the props he provides are very important, but the actual plot role... is just that.
I know that many people don't like this character. In fact, I definitely don't like this character either.
He has the idea of repentance, but before repentance he is a wicked old man, after repentance...
The heart is good.
But the brain is cramped and the action is abstract.
Since Otto is not a human being, it is fine for him to leave Destiny. Since the Serenity Gem remains in Destiny, it will make Otto think about continuing to create Herrschers of Death, so it is fine for him to take the Gem away.
But here comes the biggest problem - damn Cocolia is the one who caused the third collapse directly among the crowd. If you team up with her and I don't even call you a moron, I would feel sorry for your actions.
So this book tells that after Maki encounters the spy sent by Cocolia, he reports the spy.
I think this is what a normal person should do.
Of course, joining forces with the World Serpent is not actually a good move. After all, the World Serpent clearly stated in the Sky Chapter that they will not take human lives seriously while fighting against the Honkai. Not only will they do what Kokolia did, but they will also do it more perfectly.
But Maki doesn't know this information, so I think joining forces with Gray Snake would be at least a little better than joining forces with Cocolia.
Before I strongly criticize Maki's other idea at the time, let me first talk about some relevant information about this character in the original work.
It is true that HSN serum is awesome.
It's so awesome that even Otto sighed in the main storyline that Dr. Maki is such a genius. If he were still alive, he might want to have a drink with him [The Awakening of the Void Law].
When I first saw this plot, I thought it was about Otto's best friend who died in an accident and Otto was mourning his friend. But when I read the spin-off, I couldn't laugh anymore - he was killed by Otto's active means.
When I was reading other books before, some people were promoting the statement that "Otto didn't like unnecessary sacrifices, so he killed Maki's granddaughter because he didn't like him." This is pure bullshit.
In fact, according to the comic settings in the spin-off, the reason why Otto forced Maki to rebel was clearly stated.
[However, there will still be special cases, and some people will be aware of the problem.
For example, senior scientists of Sentence who are also deeply involved in Honkai energy research, or other people at the center of the organization.
They will gradually realize that Destiny has intentionally avoided the key part of eliminating Honkai in certain situations.
But often before they completely discover the truth, Otto will use means to eliminate these hidden dangers.
Secretly instigated Dr. Maki's granddaughter to undergo experiments, and died in front of the doctor, causing Dr. Maki to betray the organization. 】
The above is the original text of Honkai Classroom.
Yes, in fact, Otto deliberately forced Machi to rebel, at least that's how it is in the original book. It's not because Otto doesn't like meaningless sacrifices and wants to disgust Machi.
