The heroine Su Chang, who wants to be a hero, sees Lin Yu, a "hero" who is brave enough to move forward regardless of everything, and finally slowly falls in love with him... This seems to be a very common plot.
In the end, since you are here now, don’t leave. I have finished writing the story of the epilogue.
Well, next one.
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Kevin – Judging from how it’s played out since it was finished, there’s a lot less plot than I thought there would be.
In the conception of the previous book, Kevin and Otto both thought about not killing him and just seeing what happens.
After a little thought, I realized that Otto must die and Kevin would have to see the situation.
Then at that time period, Kevin came out for a while and the collapse in reality accelerated wildly. In the previous book, Kevin's choice was to join forces with Otto to suppress Ji Ran and buy time for the Stigmata Plan.
Some people may think that Kevin is incapable of doing such a thing, but in my opinion, although Ji Ran showed strong enough power at the time, he did not give Kevin a feeling of "hope".
In order to complete the plan left by the previous civilization, if there is not enough hope, I think Kevin will really do something extreme by any means necessary.
So in the end of the last book, he was buried together with Otto, but before being buried, he judged that "if I die, it means Ji Ran can indeed resist the collapse", and made all the World Snakes surrender to the enemy.
In the previous book, the people from the World Snake side were not liquidated because they were very good after Kevin's death. I didn't find an opportunity to take action so I skipped it in the end.
Then return to the book.
In this book, Lin Yu's early performance was not as good as Ji Ran's, but at the same time he gave Kevin hope.
There is one point of difference between the two.
In everyone's eyes, Ji Ran is a super Pavani who "appeared out of nowhere", while Lin Yu is a super genius who "is well known to everyone but suddenly emerged".
When people see the former, they will just think that this person is very strong; when people see the latter, they will think that this person is some kind of monster.
After all, Lin Yu's growth trajectory was public, so everyone at the time thought that this person was ridiculous, and this was also the reason why Kevin could see hope in the latter.
Of course, at this point, I was still not sure whether to keep Kevin during the serialization of this book.
The chapter on the awakening of constraints that followed the fight with Jiuyou was another climax of the book. As I was writing, I realized that something was wrong.
Before the Constraint Awakening chapter, I was unsure of the combat power of both sides, so I tried my best to weaken Kevin.
But after Lin Yu fully awakened, I suddenly discovered something.
The solitary confinement was already overwhelming for Kevin, a man who had just eaten half a full meal.
Lin Yu's restraint is not normal. With precise operation, the barrier he created is even more terrifying than ordinary restraint. This... is useless.
Originally, according to my idea, the plot of Kevin VS restraining Lin Yu should be at least two to three times as much as it is now, but as I was writing, I found that there was not so much plot at all, and Lin Yu could chop Kevin to the ground.
It was very embarrassing, but I just wrote it in the end without putting it off any further.
Let me interject here. Some people think that Kevin talks too much in this book and is OOC. I think this is a matter of personal interpretation.
I referred to the part where Kevin was released from prison in the original book. He spoke highly of human heroes like Lao Yang and Ban Ya and also wanted to recruit them into his gang. He didn't say much at the time but it wasn't too little either.
It's not like he's really emotionless, he's just cold-faced. He can speak normally when necessary.
When it came to the second duel chapter, I was very curious about one thing...
——Why is no one cursing? Where are your keyboards?
The second duel was really poorly written.
In my conception, this battle should be the last climax before the end. The atmosphere should be full and both sides should fight each other to the end, and then Lin Yu successfully knocks Kevin down and gets Kevin's recognition.
The result was a piece of shit.
As for why I wrote like this, on the one hand it was because my mood was very wrong at the time, and I was in a state where I couldn’t write anything good.
On the other hand, because...
The combat power seems to be wrong.
Kevin came out to fight, and Lin Yu couldn't beat him.
If Kevin doesn't use the End, the super-enhanced version of Constraint seems to be able to defeat Chimera Kevin without much effort.
Therefore, in order to make the battle more exciting, I, who had not yet completely collapsed, asked Lin Yu to dig out all the core players in advance.
But then an idea suddenly popped into my mind.
These two people don't necessarily want to kill each other when they fight. Lin Yu wants to prove that he has special means to bypass the Stigmata Plan. In this battle, "proving himself" is far more important than defeating Kevin.
Before becoming a warrior, Lin Yu is first and foremost a vengeful ghost. When Kevin stands in front of him, will he seek a fair duel?
It seems that it won't happen, so in the end, due to various reasons, I wrote a plot like "Lin Yu plotted against Kevin in order to prove something."
Regardless of whether it is logical or not, I just feel like a failure.
But at the same time, at this point in the plot, Kevin doesn't need to die at all.
According to my understanding, if Kevin has the chance, he will choose to live and continue to protect humanity, and Lin Yu also needs someone to stay in the rear after he goes to the Cocoon of the End to complete his transformation. Kevin + Su, the best partner, is the best candidate.
In the end, Kevin managed to survive until the end of the true ending, and nothing happened to him. This...
I don't think there's much to say, let's move on to the next one.
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Xier & Hei Xier——Actually, they were designed to have more plots in the beginning.
There is no other reason. It’s popular and I like it, so the design is that I hope the protagonist goes to rescue people as soon as possible.
But as I was writing, I realized something was not right.
The situation in this book is different from the previous one. If Lin Yu wants to find an opportunity to go to the Quantum Sea, he must create sufficient conditions for him.
Unfortunately, I didn't find any chance in the first million words, so I could only find an opportunity to make Lin Yu 'disappear' after the battle in the Constraint Awakening chapter and then let him enter the Quantum Sea to rescue him.
As a result, after this plot, even if Xier was rescued, the employment environment she had to face was very embarrassing.
In terms of strength, they are no match for those genuine Herrschers.
In terms of feelings, it came too late. Even though Bai Xi was already in the state of being conquered, Lin Yu's feelings for her had not yet developed enough.
It's very embarrassing, and I don't have the chance to write, especially in the later period when Lin Yu's dog curling disease becomes more and more serious, and there are fewer and fewer plots that Shuang Xier can write.
No matter what, when writing a character, you must show enough value as the main character. Black and White Xi cannot be said to be worthless as characters, but I haven’t thought of the right time to write their story yet.
In the end, Black and White, who were supposed to be one of the main characters, ended up going to the after-story and sitting at the same table with the minor characters.
Mistake. Big mistake.
Next one.
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Xilin & Bella - This is a supporting master and servant duo that I don't think there's much to say, so I'll just write down my thoughts on these two characters while I'm writing.
Bella read the original novel and it seemed that many people were moved by the relationship between her and Celine.
It is normal to be moved, but I guess many people forget one thing while being moved.
Bella is a magic dragon, and she has killed countless members of the Destiny.
At the same time, in my opinion, Sirin, or the evil side of Sirin, was not "converted" by Kiana even at the end of the original work.
At the end she said "well done", which I think was a recognition of Kiana, but it didn't mean she had forgotten the hatred in Sirin's heart.
So in my opinion, there is no need to whitewash these two characters and it is impossible to bring them into the protagonist group.
In the end, Bella was gone. Although Xilin was still in Kiana's body, because of Lin Yu, she didn't dare and couldn't show up.
If Lin Yu hadn't considered Lin Yi's feelings, Xilin would have been killed directly by Lin Yu.
Well, nothing much to say, next one.
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Amber - One of the supporting characters with little plot.
In both the book and the original story, he is considered Otto's number one lackey.
Well, running dog, I don’t think I used the wrong word.
She knew a lot of things Otto did, and Amber certainly didn't stop Otto from doing those things, and she might not even have the thought that "Lord Otto is going too far."
I can understand that.
After all, Otto is her creator. Unlike Theresa, Amber has never been favored by Otto.
Although I think Otto's attitude towards Theresa is that he [dotes her but will sacrifice her when necessary], Otto is really good to Theresa when it is not necessary.
And although the new version of the plot clearly states that Theresa was kind from the beginning, the old version of the comics mentioned that Theresa was a cold-blooded person at the beginning, and it was Otto who taught her to protect others [roughly].
In my opinion, Otto definitely doesn't dote on Amber that much, so in my opinion, Amber's values are unlikely to be the same as Theresa's.
At this point, her role in this book is basically determined.
Assisted Otto in doing evil, and then was taken care of by Lin Yu.
After writing the part about killing Amber after Otto's death, some people felt that Amber would not do anything desperate.
Then let’s see what the original book says.
In my opinion, Amber in the original work didn't know what to do after being set free by Otto, and then was won over by her "sister" Theresa, who gave Theresa some information prepared by Otto, and then joined the protagonist group.
Of course, just like Li Suchang, let bygones be bygones for what Amber did in the past [or just ignore these embarrassing issues].
In this plot, Amber stood on the opposite side of Otto, so some people think that Amber would not do such extreme things for Otto.
But this plot has a premise. Otto let Amber go, and Amber did something unknown that led to the subsequent events.
In this book, Otto has been forced into a corner, with no time to make many back-up plans. In my opinion, Amber should value Otto. At this stage, it is impossible for her to sit still when Otto is in danger, so in the end he was killed by Lin Yu as a matter of course.
Nothing much to say, let's move on to the next one.
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Xing - There's not much to say about this character, but I'd still like to mention it.
There was no plan to write much about this character from the beginning, and it was a surprise that we had the chance to bring him out in the Domination chapter.
After being seriously injured by Ban Ya in the plot, although there is no explanation for the follow-up, but in my personal opinion, it should be that Ban Ya asked Fu Hua to help Xing forget what he saw in the theater.
In fact, in the ten years from the finale to the Railway Arc, Cocolia still lived in the hearts of the people in the orphanage.
After all, it is not difficult to pretend that she is still alive, and everyone except Banya is still kept in the dark.
Well, next one.
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Chen Tianwu - Unlike the previous book, this book is already a sure-win.
By the time the Domination arc came to an end, it would be the same whether he was there or not, so I just brushed him aside without hesitation after completing the Herrscher tablets.
I have neither good nor bad feelings towards this character, so he survived two books quite smoothly. If he still has the collapse in the next book, I guess he won't be killed. Anyway, when I write about the collapse, I won't drag it out until a plot like Frappuccino pops up.
Next one.
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Xukong Wanzang - the super standby king who only had the chance to say a few words at the end of the game.
In my opinion, Axu is a very useful tool. When he stands on your side, he has index authority and can always pull out the appropriate technology and has certain combat capabilities. This kind of talent is needed during the revival.
As for getting Xukong Wanzang to stand on my side, in many cases, as long as I have enough power and treat him sincerely, it will be OK - that's what I think.
After all, it was created to help humans fight against the collapse. If you give it enough respect and freedom, I think Xukong Wanzang should stand on the side of humans...right?
In the Railway chapter, I guess he will appear with Lao Yang to help Lin Yu fight the dust. Hmm, next one.
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Ji Ran——One of the characters scheduled to be linked since the mid-term.
Of course I didn't think too much about it, I just wanted him to come out for a walk, meet him and leave.
Later when I wrote about the aftermath, I discovered something. When it was already confirmed that the system would return to the railways, I discovered an awkward situation.
Lin Yu is too strong.
There won't be many crises if you go to the railway, but does that mean you won't be able to get the reward?
There is no other way but to find a way to send him a new plug-in.
The new plug-in is the information sent by Ji Ran.
