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Before I started writing the epilogue, I thought about the world after the war...
But think about it, the world after the war was also described in the original book.
Although there have been some major events, during the period of 2014-2018, except for the third, fourth, fifth, Ruler of Herrscher arcs, and the Awakening of the Law of the Void event, most of the time other people in the world were relatively safe.
Therefore, although all the above sacrifices have disappeared in the world line of this book, the sacrifices should be much less after the high-level ambitious people were all dealt with by the two-person one-click team.
But in my opinion, this is not enough.
Although Lin Yu does not have the title of god, but when he has reached the stage of true transformation and fusion of the Cocoon of the End, he can be regarded as the God of Earth who has the ability to make the world a better place.
At the same time, in the previous book, Ji Ran finally chose to dominate the Cocoon of the End instead of crushing it directly with a million horses. This was because Ji Ran felt that if keeping the cocoon could save more people, there was no need to completely destroy the cocoon. It would be better to erase the underlying logic after dominating it and use it as a slave.
Of course he lived a good life after his return, and because Banya had the Listener plug-in in the previous book, and the plug-in was connected to the system database, Banya could obtain some strange black technologies from time to time. So in the world view of the previous book, in the years when Ji Ran was missing, Banya had solved some problems in the world through the black technology he obtained.
At this point, it wouldn't be surprising for Ji Ran to take the information out for a walk to see who would be suitable to use it to make life better for people in other worlds.
In Ji Ran's eyes, Lin Yu was the kind of person who was suitable to master this information.
Although Lin Yu thought about taking a rest after his return, the characteristics of the dog curler will not disappear after the work is done.
A real curling dog will not stop after finishing his work, but will find things to do for himself.
So when someone has the ability, the ideas, and someone puts powerful technology in their hands, in my opinion he will definitely want to make the world a better place.
So the true ending is also the plot I want to write.
After the war, Lin Yu, as the strongest man, certainly would not choose to enjoy a peaceful life.
As an orphan, he had not had a good life in the past.
As someone who once received love from his parents but lost it again, he should understand better than ordinary people how terrible sadness is.
Given his personality, of course he would want to reduce these tragedies.
As for how the world will become in the future, in my eyes, all the ambitious people have been wiped out, we have technology, Lin Yu also wants to make the world a better place, there are so many people around him, and he is not a tyrant by nature. I think unless I have a brain cramp and write a sequel saying something like [Lin Yu's temperament changes drastically and he begins to transform into a dark white second son], the world will only go better and better.
After a little thought, there is really nothing much to say this time.
Although fan fiction basically copies the characters in the original work, everyone has different writing styles and opinions, so naturally there will be some differences in character positioning and analysis, so I thought about it and came up with this thing.
This chapter will briefly talk about my personal views on the characters and their positioning in the book.
Emperor Otto the Great is given special treatment in a separate chapter. There is too much content, which may cause the word count to exceed the chapter limit. Don’t ask why. The answer is that his extreme fans love me too much, the kind of love that Portio mentioned verbally.
The character of the protagonist is listed separately in the front.
A total of 16,000 words, a huge waste of time, please read with caution.
The following is the text.
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The first is the system.
When talking about the system of this book, we have to mention the previous book.
A system also appeared in the previous book, and according to the plot revealed in this book, the system in the previous book and the system in this book are the relationship between predecessors and successors.
Of course, to put it bluntly, the senior and junior are just the difference between those who joined the chat group early and those who joined late. It’s just that these two systems have relatively easy personalities to get along with, so the system of this book took the initiative to recognize this identity.
I mentioned some things in the closing remarks of the previous book.
[When it comes to the plot and characters, one character cannot be avoided.
Well, the system.
Originally in my setting, the system should be the second character, and the early stage was written according to this.
But looking at everyone’s feedback, it seems like they think I’m just rambling, so forget it.
Therefore, the system was almost invisible to the naked eye later on. In addition to the fact that the dungeon line was severely cut, this was also the reason. 】
But after it was finished, I didn't write a book at that time, so I read books on various websites to recharge myself, and then I found a book.
There is also a narration in that book. The narration played a prank on me and I saw that everyone seemed to not only accept it but also like it. Then I began to reflect on why the system in my previous book was so disliked.
Later I summarized it and summarized it into the following reasons.
There are objectively people who hate him and people who think he is just wasting time, but there should also be people who like him. I saw the former and ignored the latter, so naturally I think the system's reputation is one-sided.
In addition, in my opinion, the system of the previous book is [the benefactor who resurrected the protagonist] + [the helper who helped the protagonist become stronger], but there was a problem in the writing method.
Now think back, the system in the previous book threw Ji Ran into another world, giving him more survival crisis when he was already under great pressure.
This certainly allows him to become stronger in a short period of time, and the system is reasonable, but it cannot change the fact that the system brings danger to the protagonist.
After understanding this, the system design of this book becomes much softer in this regard.
First of all, the system is still positioned as the number two role.
Then, the system must be completely harmless to the protagonist - so the so-called harm is limited to talk.
While being completely harmless, it also provides the protagonist with enough help - there will definitely be rewards when you are about to die and when you win the battle. There is a reward mechanism while assisting you to overcome difficulties, which is always better than letting you risk your life and then rewarding you.
What about the subsequent effects?
The system of this book should at least be much more pleasing to the eye than the previous one.
In addition, in my personal settings, the system of the previous book is considered to be stronger than that of the latter book. After all, although both systems have the ability to travel through the world, the previous book can give this ability directly to the host, while the latter book currently only has lottery and prompt functions. The gap is still a bit big.
From the perspective of role positioning, while Lin Yu is very grateful to the system, the system also treats Lin Yu as a bad friend.
As for the fact that some people thought the protagonist was a dog of the system during the serialization period...
I find this very strange. If someone resurrects you and helps you all the way, would you normally think that you are being a dog to your benefactor?
Apart from the occasional teasing that makes Lin Yu's blood pressure rise slightly, he should be considered a purely positive character.
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Mei - Although she is the heroine, there is not much to say about her.
Because if it is a standard start in Changkong City, the protagonist will inevitably join the game as long as he does not act as a spectator. After joining the game, he can save Mei's favorability and basically reach almost full in the early stage.
And if you choose to be a spectator and leave Mei alone...
No, then why would I need you as the protagonist? If it wasn't for special circumstances, I definitely wouldn't write it like this.
When I was reading other Honkai Impact 3rd fan fiction on the same site, I saw a reader make a statement that made a lot of sense but was unbearable.
Because Mei's favorability can be mostly maxed out in the early stages, she is overtaken by others later on, resulting in a lot of hats on her head.
This seems to be the actual situation, and the rest...
I feel like there's really not much to say, because there doesn't seem to be that much to dig out from Mei's body, and the positioning is actually very awkward.
I can’t say that Mei’s writing is very good in this book, but I hope the next book can show a little improvement.
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Kiana——Also a heroine, there is a lot to write about.
Because her life experience is a mess, and she carries the dual characteristics of "savior of the future" and "destroyer of the past", and she is even the core of the plan of the villain Otto, so her story will be obviously much more.
In the finale, Kiana still called Lin Yu "senior" not because they had a bad relationship, but because she subconsciously felt that this would make her seem a little special.
As for other aspects, here is my opinion on the writing of this character.
Kiana is burdened with a lot of blood debts, and in my opinion, these blood debts cannot be explained away by saying, "Hey, you're a reincarnation, so you don't have to take responsibility."
Of course there will be readers who will use similar reasons to excuse themselves. I won’t refute them. This is a different view and I don’t think what you said is completely unreasonable.
But here are some of my personal views.
Readers and players can help Kiana to exonerate herself, but Kiana must never take the initiative to escape this sin.
In my eyes, Kiana’s most shining moment was not when she saw the Sky Meteor, nor when she defeated Kevin and the false god, but when she faced the Herrscher of the Void in the Domination Theater and took the initiative to say "I am Sirin".
At that moment, she faced her evil side, acknowledged her past identity, and chose to move forward even if it meant carrying the sin. In my opinion, this is what Kiana Kaslana should do.
So whether it is the previous book or this book, the Kiana I wrote must not escape from this matter.
Of course, as for the state of mind, because the plots on both sides progressed too quickly, the younger generation’s state of mind was unable to keep up, but that’s another story.
In addition, because the opening of Fire Flame often means Jizi's death in battle, and Jizi has no chance to die after the protagonist appears, the Herrscher of Fire Flame does not appear in either of the two books. This is also something that cannot be helped.
According to my definition and writing style of the protagonist, if I continue to write Honkai Impact 3rd in the future, I probably won’t have the chance to write Herrscher of the Fire.
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Rita - Actually, after writing the first chapter, I was not sure about the setting that Lin Yu was Rita's brother. This was added in the second chapter.
Of course there is not much difference.
At the beginning, Rita was not set as the heroine, which can be seen from the plot content. She and Dai E were hanging around the headquarters. After the plot map moved to Saint Freya, they actually had fewer opportunities to appear.
Even though I added special plots for her in the Nine Nether Rebellion and Moon Shadow chapters, she still doesn't have many opportunities to appear because she is mainly with Saint Freya on a daily basis.
Of course, Rita and Lin Yu later developed a deeper connection, which in my opinion is the kind of plot that "well, the emotions are there, there seems to be no need to avoid it."
As for the fact that Rita likes to smelt copper ore so she brought Lin Yu along, I have to say that the age difference between them is only two years, and it's just a waste of copper. Some readers are just thinking too much.
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Bronya——One of the super unlucky people in this book.
Oh, no, because of the way I write, I have been a super unlucky person from the last book to this one.
Because I am an unlucky girl with a serious brain disease, her background has been very bad since the beginning of the story.
In my opinion, it is very abnormal that in the original book, Banya can live so easily in Saint Freya.
It was mentioned in the Blue Sea chapter, let me take a look at Banya’s mission in the third Honkai Impact 3rd.
Cocolia is responsible for causing the Honkai, and Bronya's mission is to [recover the awakened Raiden Mei].
how to say......
Cocolia really thinks highly of her daughter.
Of course, this is not the point of this section. The point is that this plot clearly states that Bronya is part of Cocolia's plan.
Given her feelings for Xier, she would definitely not refuse, and would even take the initiative to assist Cocolia in doing this.
At the beginning of this book, someone jumped out and said, "Hey, that's not right. Bronya just went to retrieve Mei Raiden. The third collapse has nothing to do with her." to help Banya clean up his mess.
I think that since she has participated in this plan and there is a high probability that she is not opposed to it, it is not too much to say that she is an accomplice of Cocolia.
Instead of sympathizing with pressed duck, it is better to sympathize with the millions of people who died inexplicably.
Of course, the two-dimensional world is like this, face and figure are more important than anything else. Maybe for some people, the sacrifice of millions of nameless people in Changkong City may not be a big deal. Anyway, it’s right not to scold the banya.
Of course, the protagonist certainly can't think like this.
Not to mention the memories that the protagonist had forgotten at the time, even if he was really a person who had just traveled through time, it was impossible for him to say to Banya, hey, it was right for you to do this to save Xier.
Banya is a very bad person. In order to get her into the team, mental torture is necessary.
If Banya couldn't realize how excessive the things she and Cocolia had done were, I would have brought Lin Yu into the picture later. I just felt that I couldn't possibly trust this person.
In addition, judging from the situation outside the book, I can't say, "You are a beautiful girl, so you are not guilty of harming humans." I don't expect everyone to redeem themselves, but at least you can't do without some self-reflection.
This is not a problem that can be solved by just patting the duck's butt.
Anyone who has read this book to the end normally would know that I have a problem where I sometimes place too much emphasis on logic.
In my personal logic, Bronya is set to have a very high IQ, she has killed people on her own initiative, and in the plot she can hack into the destiny database directly in the room [Sakura Memories plot]. In the early stage, she had the heavily armored Usagi, so she might be more difficult to deal with than Mei who dared not release her power and Kiana who didn't know that she had the power of the law of space.
If you want to be a teammate with such a person, you must make her realize that Cocolia is wrong, and make her realize that following Cocolia will not save Xier and will kill many people. On the contrary, following the protagonist will give her the opportunity to do what she wants. Only then can the protagonist feel at ease.
On the other hand, if Banya is successfully pulled into the team by the protagonist, she will actually have no problem playing a good supporting role if she cannot get the core.
But the core point is very embarrassing. In Lao Yang's book, he changed from a second-class cripple to a second-class Herrscher [Why is it second-class? His fighting ability is really not enough.], plus he knew in advance that there was a problem in Haiyuan City and had the help of Su and Quansheng Siegfried, so he didn't get beaten up in order to hold Kevin back like in the original book, so the inheritance of law and justice couldn't go on at all.
All I can say is that in the judgment of Honkai, Lao Yang gave Honkai a gap when he created the God Key's virtual force, giving him the opportunity to transfer the core to Banya, and then rely on controlling the dramas in the theater to cooperate.
There should have been an exclusive plot where the protagonist saves the situation, but Banya's personal plot line went to the hospital early because of Cocolia's death, so there was no such plot of the protagonist saving the situation in the theater. In my opinion, Banya can solve the small problem by himself.
Why didn't I touch on this when I finished this story? Look at the fact that she was still in her mother's womb during the second collapse, and then think about why I delayed it for three and a half
In addition, regarding the plot handling of Cocolia, as mentioned before, before Banya joins the protagonist team, she must be tortured until she knows that there is something wrong with her. This is also to pave the way for sending Cocolia away later.
She should be made to realize that 'Mother died because of herself and not because of everyone', so that she won't have an overly serious knot in her heart. Otherwise, if she becomes law-abiding later, even if Lao Qiao is in the core with 300,000 people guarding the gate, she probably won't have an easy time.
