So I included the story of Cocolia in this book.
After all, according to the original book, it is unlikely that Cocolia would have made all these things happen and then watched the cooked duck fly away.
It is even more impossible for her to be cowardly. She dares to send a bunch of Titans to attack the Herrscher. Would she be cowardly?
Then she had to be there.
Then we continue to the next part, Cocolia is causing trouble, and the Chicken Coop and Lobster duo can't possibly know nothing, after all, Ryuma has gone in.
They can't be at the forefront of this matter. At this time, Anti-Entropy must find a way to stop Cocolia from putting the blame on themselves, so they can only let Sieg fly out.
It was not surprising that Siegfried appeared in Changkong City. The daughter of his old friend Ryoma was targeted, and his own second daughter was also in danger. With his personality, could he stay there at this time?
Continue following this.
In the original novel, Theresa said that we should trust Major Himeko, but after looking at the second collapse, we know that this is bullshit.
Theresa brought the Key of God to fight against Sirin who had just awakened her power. The final result was that Sirin beat Theresa to the brink of death not long after.
At that time, Lao Yang's words made it clear that Siegfried must take Theresa away immediately, otherwise Theresa's life would be in danger.
The S-class Valkyrie + Key of God was knocked down by the Herrscher of the Void in a few moves, and an A brought the Nexus system and Hyperion over. Anyone with a little bit of brains knew that this was courting death.
In addition, Otto himself must know about the third collapse. As a person with a very high IQ, he might leave the Conquest Gem and the Herrscher there and give them to Anti-Entropy?
This is obviously impossible.
Referring to the Moon Shadow chapter, I actually think the plot of the Moon Shadow chapter is not as reasonable as the later ones, but at least part of the plot is normal.
After Otto learned that Cocolia was about to bring out the Herrscher of Death, he immediately asked Yulandel to prepare for battle.
At that time, Fu Hua was still near K423, so it can be said that this wave was a double insurance.
Then it would be normal for him to have a normal IQ and send enough people to Changkong City.
The fact that Rita was upgraded to S-level was my second creation, so there's nothing much to say about it. However, she is a genius, so it's not a big problem for her to become S-level a few months to a year earlier.
By the way, anyone who has watched the Escape from the Sky knows that the Escape from the Sky itself does not have much plot, and there are a lot of blank spaces.
There are a lot of blank spaces, and I think it should not be a problem for me to fill in these spaces as the author... Well, not the author, but as a secondary writer who wants to make some money, it should not be a problem for me to fill in the blanks in the plot according to my own understanding, right?
Or do you think it would be better if I wrote an original Changkong City plot where [Theresa allowed her old friend Himeko to be killed by the Herrscher], [Otto, a shrewd man, was not prepared to ensure the conquest of the Gems and the return of K423 to Destiny], [Cocolia, the behind-the-scenes pusher, did nothing and watched Raiden Mei being captured by Destiny], [The Lobster and Chicken Coop duo turned a blind eye to Cocolia's disregard for human life], and [Siegfried knew that his friend's daughter and his own daughter were in danger and did nothing]?
It is true that fan fiction should respect the original work, but it is impossible to write fan fiction completely based on the original work.
What’s more, this is an early original work with a lot of loopholes.
To put it bluntly, if I really wrote it according to the Escape from the Sky chapter, it would be disrespectful to the subsequent plots and settings.
Since when has it become problematic to write fan fiction that adds its own plot based on speculations from the original work?
There is one more thing that needs to be made clear.
This book is a fan fiction, so some changes in settings and plots are inevitable.
If there is any inconsistency in the settings, I apologize in advance.
But there is one thing I want to say, even if it offends people.
Things turned out like this, of course, because I don't understand the settings comprehensively enough, but even if you ask miHoYo's copywriter to sort out all the settings, he won't be able to figure them out.
Here are a few simple questions.
1. Are the four great gems the four fragments of the Herrscher of the Void or are they independent cores?
2. Was Kallen's father Francis Kaslana dead or alive before Kallen's death?
3. Was the third collapse in 2014, 2010 or 2011?
4. Was Kiana two years old or older when Siegfried defected from his destiny?
5. In the main storyline, is the head of the Apocalis family Otto or Theresa?
6. Was the Oath of Judah made by Otto or by the previous civilization?
7. Did Siegfried touch the buttocks of all the Valkyries in Hyperion?
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The answer time is as follows
1. Are the four great gems the four fragments of the Herrscher of the Void or are they independent cores?
The answer is both.
The only difference is that in the early part of the main storyline it is clearly stated that the four gems are the four fragments of the Herrscher of the Void [there is even a saying that she cannot use her full power because she only has one-fourth of the core], and then in the comics it is changed to each being an independent gem core.
2. Was Kallen's father Francis Kaslana dead or alive before Kallen's death?
The answer is both.
The only difference is that in the Destiny Database in the Sakura Memories arc, Kallen explicitly mentioned that when she was captured and executed, "it was useless, Dad had already made the decision", clearly indicating that Francis was alive at the time.
In the Purple Iris chapter, it is clearly mentioned that Francis launched the Judgment of Heavenly Fire and died together with the Honkai Beast when Otto and Kallen were young.
Of course, there will definitely be people who say that the database can be modified at will.
The question is why Otto would modify the database to show Francis was still alive and also make the decision to let Kallen die.
It is clearly mentioned in the plot that Otto regarded Francis as a god. He had respect for Francis himself, so there was no reason for him to discredit his father-in-law after five hundred years.
So in fact, the two exist at the same time and then conflict.
3. Was the third collapse in 2014, 2010 or 2011?
The answer is that both have existed.
The official timeline is that when the game started in 2016, it was two years after the third collapse, so normally it would have been 2014.
However, the Japanese official book of Honkai Impact 3 mentions the time of the third Honkai outbreak in 2010/2011.
Yes, you read that right, this book alone shows two different times of the third collapse.
So these times all exist.
4. Was Kiana two years old or older when Siegfried defected from his destiny?
The main storyline mentioned that Siegfried ran away with his men in 06, but the Japanese official book also mentioned that Siegfried left when his daughter was two years old.
5. In the main storyline, is the head of the Apocalis family Otto or Theresa?
It is still a formal book.
The official book mentions that Otto is the head of the family, and the main storyline says that Theresa is the head of the family.
6. Was the Oath of Judah made by Otto or by the previous civilization?
The comics clearly mention that the Oath of Judah was made by Otto to Kallen, and then it later became the Key to the God of the Former Civilization.
7. Did Siegfried touch the buttocks of all the Valkyries in Hyperion?
In the Moon Shadow Chapter - Miracle Interview, it was mentioned that Siegfried "is indeed the man who touched the buttocks of all the Valkyries on the Hyperion and acted as if nothing had happened."
Then later it turned out that it was Shigure Kirara who spread the rumor.
The two also exist at the same time.
Having said so much, I just want to say that it is precisely because I have seen too many settings and official plots that I can’t tell which is which.
MiHoYo is always copying books, and now there's this official book that looks like it has absolutely no proofreading. It would be strange if you don't feel overwhelmed after reading it.
I don't think this is my fault. It's just so confusing that even if you let the officials do it themselves they may not be able to tell the difference.
So I can only follow the general plot and fill in some details on my own. It would be better to find a compilation and read it than to expect me to write according to the original.
I don't mean to look down on editing. In my opinion, it is also a mature literary style.
I just think that it is inevitable for fan fiction to change. If you want to read the original text version, then the edited version is more suitable for this type of readers.
I apologize again to everyone for complaining so much today.
As compensation, I will update five more chapters in the evening, making a total of ten chapters in twenty-four hours today.
[Sixth update] Chapter 38. Cocolia, you deserve to die!
Faced with Kiana's request at this time, Cocolia in Me Company couldn't help but sigh, she is worthy of being the daughter of Lady Cecilia, she is really not easy to deal with.
But unfortunately, your request was also within my expectations.
After all, even if you are Lady Cecilia's daughter, you are just a little girl.
You are wandering around looking for your father, and when you meet "an acquaintance of your father", you will definitely ask to contact your father.
So, I had already prepared the AI-synthesized voice.
As long as I let the people on my side respond according to my instructions, then dealing with this little girl will not be a problem.
Even for Cocolia, she has even prepared the synthetic images, and her main focus is on having a plan that is foolproof.
As long as she could trick Kiana to come to her side, even if the little girl found something unusual, Cocolia would just suppress her herself.
As for why she wanted to bring Kiana back to her side.
She didn't want the daughter of her savior to die in the third collapse, and this reason was indeed not false.
But this doesn't mean that this is the only reason why Cocolia tried to take Kiana away.
According to the information obtained by Bronya through electronic warfare, Siegfried has already appeared in Changkong City.
And Siegfried's appearance here is definitely not to help Cocolia.
Humph, when it comes down to it, those guys who hang out with those old-fashioned conservatives simply can't understand my good intentions.
As long as he gets his daughter under his control first, this guy won't dare to act rashly.
"I promise you, it won't be a hassle to contact Siegfried."
At this time, Cocolia signaled his subordinates to activate the voice system and immediately issued an order.
"Hi, Kiana, I'm your stinky dad Siegfried Kaslana."
"It's been a long time since we last met. Have you missed me during this time?"
"Eh?"
At this moment, in the eyes of the mercenaries, the girl in front of them showed a look of surprise.
"Dad? Is it really you?"
"Of course, absolutely, my dear daughter."
Oh, forget it.
First of all, Stinky Dad would not address himself by his full name so formally when meeting him, and secondly, he would not call himself 'Stinky Dad' either.
Secondly, my dad is usually not serious. After getting drunk, he wanted to teach me how to seduce men - how could the words he said when we met be so normal.
You'll definitely want to say something semi-harassing like "let me see how you've developed"!
Cocolia... this woman really has bad intentions.
And the trouble is quite serious now. If we want to retreat, the best time has not yet come.
Now I have to pretend that I believe her, otherwise the mercenaries will definitely react...
So disgusting.
I actually have to play along with the bad guy pretending to be my dad.
"Tsk, you left me without saying a word, and then you showed up when another woman called you."
Kiana, who was feeling nauseous at this moment, looked at the mercenary leader and immediately revealed an annoyed expression.
"Damn dad! You pervert! You might as well die outside!"
The mercenaries who were watching Kiana did not notice anything unusual at this time.
Yeah, that's right.
This is how a teenage girl should react to her father abandoning her.
"Haha, don't blame Dad."
Cocolia at Me Company instructed her subordinates to continue.